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Kyle Finn
Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36
Linn, MO USA

0 posted 2000-08-05 07:36 PM


In my heart her words stay,
In my bed I think and now lay.
Of her I do think,
Our love will never sink.
Red is the color of love,
I use it for my angel from above.
The only person that really gets to me,
Yes I mean you Jessie.
Is my girlfriend and my Sweetie,
Makes my head spin and feel tweetie.
My heart is on fire,
My only desire.
My passion for her is endless,
Like a far far abyss.
That's how I love her so,
How much she does know.
I thank the Lord for this great gift,
My spirits she does lift.
And in my heart I truly believe,
Our love we will conceive.
FOREVER in my heart she will be....

© Copyright 2000 Kyle Finn - All Rights Reserved
TopGunLauren
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
1 posted 2000-08-05 07:39 PM


I loved your poem keep up the great work I can't wait to read more of your poems.
  Lauren

Kyle Finn
Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36
Linn, MO USA
2 posted 2000-08-05 07:51 PM


well i got lots in here....look for Kyle aka Huck and thanks for your support  
Squirter
Junior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 17
Minnesota
3 posted 2000-08-05 11:03 PM


Awesome poem!  Jessie sounds very special!  Keep up the great writing about this special girl!  It's awesome to have someone that makes you feel that way, isn't it?  NEVER let her feel underappreciated!  

Love Always,
Nicole

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

4 posted 2000-08-05 11:06 PM


Welcome to PAssions and I hope to read more of this wonderful work! An example of the beauty of love. Keep at it!

Salooma

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-08-06 08:33 AM


Welcome to Passions Kyle!

This was an absolutely sweet and wonderful
poem ... so many lovely sentiments ... hope to read more!

(check your e-mail for a special message)

Best wishes,
/Kit

SweetPoet17
Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108

6 posted 2000-08-06 09:11 AM


Aw that was very sweet, my names Jessica too! hehe Well anyways, I hope oneday to have a guy feel as strongly about me as you do about your girlfriend, best of luck to the both of you.
-jessica-

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