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A Friend...... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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A FRIEND...... A FRIEND ID LIKE A FLOWER, A ROSE TO BE EXACT. OR MAYBE LIKE A BRAND NEW GATE, THAT NEVER COMES UNLATCHED. A FRIEND IS LIKE AN OWL, BOTH BEAUTIFUL AND WISE. OR PERHAPS A FRIEND IS LIKE A GHOST, WHOSE SPIRIT NEVER DIES. A FRIEND IS LIKE A BLADE OF GRASS, THAT YOU CAN NEVER MOW, STANDING STRAIGHT, TALL AND PROUD, IN A PERFECT LITTLE ROW. A FRIEND IS LIKE A HEART, THAT GOES STRONG UNTIL THE END. WHERE WOULD I BE IN THIS WORLD, IF I DIDNT HAVE YOU AS MY FRIEND. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
extremely well versed. i like this a lot. whoever you write this for must be a real gem, and they are damn lucky to have a true blue pal like you too. "You are not special. You are not a brilliant and unique snowflake. You are part of the same decaying organic matter as everyone else. We are all part of the same compost heap. We are the all-singing, all-dancing crap of the world." -Tyler Durden "He who makes a beast of himself is rid of the pain of being a man." -Hunter S. Thompson "On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone is zero." -Tyler Durden We all got somethin' to atone for. -Ethan Halo |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Dearest Erin~ this is a very sweet poem! I hope your friend has received this!  Nicely written. Your words seem to come so easily and flow very nicley  Love Always~*~Jessica~*~   "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" "Shoot for the moon, if you shall fall short, you always have the stars to fall upon" |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
no offense to anyone else, but THIS IS MY STYLE OF WRITING!! i love it! it has a rythem AND a ryme and flows perfectily it has a strong meaning thats not diluted by too many or too few words this poem is...perfect...for lack of a better word (atleast this is how i have been writing so far and im glad that someone writes like me!) anyway very good poem i hope to see more (and if this isnt ur true style of writing, i understand i can be a fool sometimes) hehe CLB always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
you must be a great friend and your friend must be the same i hope this brought tears to his/her eye's (ones of joy of course). i know it would have mine. i love it. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
where have i been all this time? can't belive myself for missing this one too.. I think this is one of your most beautiful poems you've ever written. This friend must really mean a lot to you. Hope you 2 are still going strong As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hey!! luvd this one ERIN!!! if everything sorts out between me and you-know-who, can I borrow this one and let him read this? luvz, VS! Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Acire~~~Wow thank you so much for bringing this one up...Friendships have their ups and downs you know what I mean...And things arent going so great with me and her right now...But things will be back to normal soon I hope... VS~~~Of course you could if you want!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
This is soooo sweet Erin. A true friend will listen to what you have to say. A best friend hears the words that you can't say. I am so thankful everyday for my friends. Thanks for reminding me how important they are. jason  I'm not concieted...I'm convinced. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jason~~~I heard a quote but I cant remember the whole thing...About the best conversation with a friend is when you can just sit there without saying a word and get up and leave as if you just had the best conversation...I dont know its something like that...Anyways thank you for the reply!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
ERIN, Great description here. Picturesque and beautifully put. Thomas Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Well I missed this one too!! It's great, like all the rest. I hope whoever you wrote this about read it. Well keep it up. Hasta luego Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thank you Thomas and Isabel for your replies...And Isabel of course the person who this is for seen it... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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