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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN
Junior Member

since 2000-08-04

Posts 20

0 posted 2000-08-04 01:49 PM

Tears of Loneliness

When I thought the final tears had fallen from my lonely eye,
When I thought I'd fallen to my knees for the last time to cry
When I thought the heartache faded, and the memories were gone
I still find myself in love with you, still trying to hold on
I can still hear your voice, whispering to me while I sleep
I can still see your face, smiling at me in dreams so deep
I can still feel the touch of your hands around my waist
And I can still feel the sweetness of your lips against my face
I'll think I hear your laughter, and it haunts me to my soul
Cuz in this deepest part of me, I just can't seem to let go
And the emptiness of my world echoes off my cries
And all the tears of loneliness fall once again from my eyes.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-08-04 01:57 PM

you are a very talented writer!!! every poem so for that i have read from you impressed me...keep up the good work!!!and i will keep reading!!!

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2000-09-25 03:50 PM

Im speechless, just plain speechless. I don't know what to say...all your poems are magnificent...I never though anyone could write so much emotions.

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

3 posted 2000-09-25 04:05 PM

One word: WOW! This was incredible. I look forward to much, much more of your fabulous work.

~Carly

Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

4 posted 2000-09-25 04:30 PM

WOW you have quite an imagination! i really enjoyed this poem and hope to see more like it!
Curlz

"I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky"
Enrique Iglesias

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

5 posted 2000-09-25 05:22 PM

Was a very wonderful and thought provoking piece. Two thumbs up!

~*~Star~*~< !signature-->

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-25-2000).]

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

6 posted 2000-09-26 08:59 AM

wow this poem is geat. It must be trerrible to miss him so much, and not be able to have him near.
It really sucks to be alone.

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