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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN
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since 2000-08-04
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0 posted 2000-08-04 02:08 AM


Dreaming of You

Sometimes when it's late at night,
I look up at the sky with stars shining bright
In the back of my mind, I imagine you are
Somewhere far away, looking at the same star
I then close my eyes and to God I pray
I ask Him to make sure that you're doing okay
I hope that you're happy, with a smile on your face
And whatever you're doing, I pray that you're safe
Cuz even if we cannot be together,
I want the best for you, now and forever
And if at any moment, you are feeling pain
Remember I'm here for you through sunshine and rain
There is not a single moment that passes me by
When I am not thinking of you and longing deep inside
But whatever you do, and wherever you go
It would make me so happy as long as you'd know
That no matter how much we've both grown apart
You'll always have a special place deep in my heart
And I long for the day when you come around,
When I can hold you close, as heaven shines down
But even if that day never arrives,
I'll keep dreaming of you, and keep the memories alive


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Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
1 posted 2000-08-04 02:20 AM


Impressive flow skills, I think you’re a natural.  This all seems very pure and from the heart, none of it forced in the least.  True subjective beauty at its best!
Great work and welcome to passions from the Darkside.  


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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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2 posted 2000-08-04 08:03 AM


Welcome to Passions!  This had a beautiful flow .. such sweet and tender thoughts of friendship ... nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2000-09-24 04:38 PM


you have the most amazing talent.  everytime you put words together, they end up melting my heart,  pls keep writing

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sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
4 posted 2000-09-24 04:50 PM


that was awesome!! I really liked that. Keep writing!

Luv,
Sweetstuff


~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~



Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 380
Maine, USA
5 posted 2000-09-24 09:32 PM


This was a BEA-UUUUUUU-TIFUL poem! Keep up the great work!  
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