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Backstabber |
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Joy Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 10 |
I remember it well That one fatal night The first time ever That we'd had a fight No not with a guy She was my best friend But our friendship that night Almost came to an end What was I thinking? I'd been drinking too much I knew he was hers I was not sposed to touch Blame no one alone It's not his fault nor mine When I asked for advice, People said, "Give her time" You were hurting so much You were on the attack Betrayed by a friend You were stabbed in the back But people were right Because as time goes on That horrible night fades The hatred is gone I will never forgive myself For the pain I caused you I am honestly sorry Please believe me, it's true Rhiana Wall |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Welcome to Passions!!! I enjoyed reading your first post. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Rhiana! This was a very thought-provoking first post ... very poetically penned. I'm glad to see that your point of view takes responsibility for your actions. Drinking can lead to many regretful situations, and this is only one of many. You are fortunate that it appears that your friend has a forgiving nature. Apologies in the form of poetry can be healing for both the reader, and the writer ... keep up the writing, and check your e-mail for a special message. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Welcome to passions! This is a great first post and I hope you keep writing and submitting more to passions! Salooma |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions!!! do i know this feeling...my best friend did this to me...i didnt talk to him till 4 months later...her it was like 1 and a half months...eventually she will come around...she will miss you...and just like they say give it time... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Welcome to passions!!! please don't be mad but first of all, drinking is the lamest excuse for something wrong we've done. Actually, it's not an excuse at all....Unfortunately, we all make our mistakes and have to pay for it. As long as you really feel remorse for what you have done, that's all that counts. It's obviously gonna be hard for your friend to accept this, but yes, give her time. Sorry to hear that you're in a situation like this. Great writing, looking forward to reading more of your poems.  |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
welcome. Great poem. I hope your friend can forgive you and things work out. I hope to read more of your poems. Lovely_Kris |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow great first poem. Looking forward to reading more... ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I loved your poem it was really good.If your best friend has a heart she will forgive you because we all make stupid mistakes.Especially when alcohol is involved trust me i know well. Lauren |
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