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A promise
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A promise |
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Enchanted Star Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 14New Port Richey, FL |
"A promise" Bond together Drawn to each others By a promise A certainity Our hearts intertwined to faithfull surrender Hearts locked and sealed Only be opend by one another's kiss A belief so true so unreal Full of life There is nothing more ture to be Than his promise to me.. CindyLuC |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
wow i really like this one too your pretty good keep on writing and posting |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
first of all welcome to passions...i hope that you enjoy it here as much as i do...keep up the good work...i liked this poem... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I love the emotion you put into all your work. Again this is a great piece and shows a bond undestroyable. Keep writing! Salooma |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Beautiful dahling, simply enchanting. You seem to have a positive flair for the written word. I enjoy your work immensely. Ok, getting off my snobby monologue, cool poem, short 'n sweet, very well-written. I commend you. *~Meredith~* If I were the sun, You would be in shadow And if I had a gun, There'd be no tomorrow *BNL |
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