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My Soulmate...
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My Soulmate... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I was just wondering if I could really do this..I mean just sit here and write a poem..I feel inspired and I hope it turned out ok..I guess it's just something I needed to get out of my system *shrugs* I truly believe that he is my soulmate One of a kind Always helpful when it is my sanity I need to find He never lets me stumble Never lets me fall He is the one I owe it all to After relentless hours of soul searching It ended with just one call Just at the right moment Just at the right time, when my world was crumbling And I was just about to fall He set my soul free With a long distance smile But it was all the same It was all worth while Now I just sit and wait patiently As I go on through life casually Waiting for that day to live out my destiny To hold my soulmate in my arms Like I did many lifetimes ago And never have to shed another tear Or to have the fear of being alone... "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ |
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crazy4her New Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 3 |
truly moving! keep up the great poems. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Why you wondered whether or not you could do it, is beyond me. YOU DID!! < !signature-->And you did it quite well. Very eloquent! Your writing is very touching and heartfelt. I think I know who this is about~hehehe  Keep it up my dear! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 07-29-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
whoever this guy is must be really special...i wish you the best...and i hope that one day soon you will be able to hold your soulmate in your arms... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
very good i think this is a great poem and im glade things worked out for you. Great job and i hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. I think you did great. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
This is so beautifull and so heartfelt, and I am so running out of superlatives. He is just going to love this one. I wish someone would write for me like this. You two are lucky, and I hope that when you meet that sparks fly and your souls ignite into a flame that is never extinguished. Oh wow. Jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Well, I can't compete with what Jason said, but I did enjoy your poem. It was beautiful. Throw away your fire extinguisher! (little joke there) Peace out. *~Meredith~* If I were the sun, You would be in shadow And if I had a gun, There'd be no tomorrow *BNL |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
beautiful poem keep up the good work |
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