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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-07-28 08:48 AM


To be with you is why I get up
To be with the one I love
I have been blessed to have you
To be happy with my life
To be heard
I have been blessed to have you
To be loved
To be liked
I have been blessed to have you
To be me
To be yours
I have been blessed


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

© Copyright 2000 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

1 posted 2000-07-28 10:52 AM


what a wounderful poem. I really enjoyed your poem and keep up the good work. I also hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-07-28 11:37 AM


chel i am really glad that you have someone in your life like that...keep up the good work...i am very impressed...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

FairyPrincess
Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25

3 posted 2000-07-28 02:06 PM


chel,your lucky to have someone that special in your life. I loved the poem..keep up the good work, I hope to read more.

*Jess*

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
4 posted 2000-07-28 03:40 PM


that was wonderful, i really liked it!  
Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
5 posted 2000-07-28 06:04 PM


I am really happy that you all enjoyed it.  I hope to get to everyone else's poems too.  Keep your heads up and work hard.

Luv always,
Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
6 posted 2000-07-28 10:24 PM


a wonderful verse about counting your blessings. =)

well done. it's good to be thankful for the little things. the little things make up the big things.
and sometimes, loved ones are both.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
7 posted 2000-07-29 01:37 PM


wow, nice poem Michelle.
I enjoyed reading it.

Euclid the Kid
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since 2000-07-15
Posts 51
Eugene,Oregon
8 posted 2000-07-29 01:43 PM


Chel,
it's nice when you can get to that place in your life- it seems there are so many dead end before you find something so wonderful--keep counting those blessings!  Dean

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