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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
i just want to go far away leave all my troubles back behind follow the bright star of day to see what new things i can find i dont know whats wrong with me it seems my happiness cannot be gained too hard to let the anger free so my soul remains painful and stained |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a good poem...but one day something good is gonna happen...and your gonna look back and see this poem...and say did i really feel like that... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
very well done piece. short, schemed, and quick to make several points... perhaps moving on and holding it in is not the answer you seek. perhaps you must face these demons inside. good luck. and an awesome read. much remains unsaid. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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