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Rachel8383
Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44


0 posted 2000-07-26 01:27 PM


i'm sorry

i'm sorry i always apologize
for things i shouldn't even have to.
and i'm sorry that i'm the way i am,
it's all i've ever known.

i'm sorry, too, letting you down
because i was to scared to do what i should.
i'm sorry i hurt you.
i have no excuse for it, i just did.

and i'm sorry that i can't help
but be the way i am, if i could i would change.

i'm sorry i always say i'm sorry.
and you're right, one day i will probably just snap,
i just want you to be there to keep me safe.
is this what you love so much?
a sniveling, crying, little pathetic baby?
you say i'm "your little baby."
it seems that's all i've added up to be.
i'm sorry

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amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-07-26 03:00 PM


No Rachel! stand up to what you are. you never know unless you try. don't let some one cower you.

Sincerely
A_L

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-07-26 05:18 PM


you know what i think??? i think that the words im sorry are only taught for manners...we say sorry when we do something wrong...but you shouldnt say it for anything and everything...unless its your fault...and you shouldnt be sorry for being the way you are...you shouldnt change for anyone not even a guy you are madly in love with...if they dont like you for who you are...they are not worth your time...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-07-27 06:39 AM


I can feel the genuine sorrow in your words Rachel.  You've done your part dear ... now it's up to them to find forgiveness in their heart.  Don't hurt yourself further by continuing to feel guilt or sorrow ... be the best you can be, and be proud of it from here on out!  That's all each of us can do ... take care  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
4 posted 2000-07-28 08:30 AM


Rachel, Not everything is your fault.  Stand up for what you believe in and don't let people put you down.  Keep up the good work.  Keep your head up always.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

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