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sherm
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since 2000-07-21
Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-07-26 03:15 AM


hush
dont think about it
i dont want to
it will make you sad
your heart will have a fit
and so will mine
itll drive me to go mad
so clear it out
everything is fine
im not gone yet
please dont pout
give me a smile
dont let your eyes get wet
just cherish this year
its really a long while
and youll never lose me
so have no fear
for life without you
i cannot see


i wrote this because im going to be a senior this year and then i will hopefully be going to west point whjch will be tough for my girlfriend but we dont want to lose each other


© Copyright 2000 Geoff A. Anderson - All Rights Reserved
Sheila425
New Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 9

1 posted 2000-07-26 04:07 AM


You have a beautiful talent. I wouldn't be surprised if I ever read a poem by you in a published room on the net. Or even in a book. Keep writing =o)

"Never frown...you never know who is falling in love with your smile."

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-07-26 04:35 PM


well i wish you the best of luck...hopefully everything will turn out good...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-03 09:40 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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