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I'll Be The One
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I'll Be The One |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
Yes, inspired by Backstreet Boys' "The One," I'm writing one like it...but much different....and in my opinion, this one sucks. These are feelings. "I'll Be The One" You are here for me when you can I am there for you when I can You'll be the one to kiss me I'll be the one to hold you You'll be the one to take my hand I'll be the one that will be able to lead you in any direction If you never say "I love you" I'll be the one to say it I'll be the one to take you where you want to Let love take us where it leads us I'll be the one to love you I'll be the one to cherish you I'll be the one to kiss you I'll be the one to be there when I can Take my hand.... And I'll be the one To lead you to eternity -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die." |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I thought this was a great poem. I really did like it. Keep up the good work. I wanted to be the first person to respond to it. Nice talking to you earlier hope to do it again. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
Hehe, thanks. Took me only 10 minutes to write...heh. Sometimes it's really easy to write, then other times, hard as hell. But umm, I may not be posting til Monday or Tuesday because I'm gone to the beach! Woohoo! Later. -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die." |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Once again, I love the poem. Don't be so hard on yourself. You have a talent. "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
A very nice poem. You obviously feel very strongly about this person, I don't think that you should let them go. Keep up the great writing. Love Always, Shell. When I'm dreaming I'm guided through another world Time and time again At sunruse I fight to stay alseep 'Cause I don't want to leave the comfort o |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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