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Longing for Love
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Longing for Love |
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Rockhead01 Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 12Maryland, USA |
Longing for Love I have long yet waited For a beautiful woman to love This feeing I have inside Lingurs for my one true love I've tried and tried to love Many, many times before But nothing ever worked out My delicate heart always tore I wish to find someone Loving, caring and kind I hope she comes to me soon Or I may lose my mind I want to feel the love I see everywhere I go All those couples in love This I want to know I'm sure she'll come Either tomorrow or in a year But what if she doesn't come That's my greatest fear Escaping this brutal pain Is my only dream And walking next to her Under a warm moon beam All those nights waisted Crying endlessly in my bed And if I do not find her I think I'd rather be dead I want to be able To dream of her at night And having her be my First and last sight Waking up next to her Is a fantasy in itself And to look at her face In a picture on the shelf Make Love Not War |
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Rockhead01 Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 12Maryland, USA |
this is my poem, but my sister had herself logged in instead of me on this puter, so this is my poem but i submitted it twice on accident. sorry for the mixup. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I loved the poem and I hope that you do find that special someone. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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