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The Loudest Voice I Hear....
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The Loudest Voice I Hear.... |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
I hear many, many voices each, and every day. Some that are close, while others are far away. Each and every day, another voice, another face whose sound i can remember, but whose face i never can trace. But of all the millions of voices, heard on a street, or through a wall, is the the ONE VOICE i listen to THE most of all. This voice just happens to be in my head, so i hear it during breakfast, and when i go to bed i hear my own voice over all the other noise. Instructing me, teaching me so i'll make the right choice. it gives me comfort, from most things that are bad. but it's also my worst critic, sometimes making me sad. it tells me "GET UP!!" when i'm down, and almost out. It inspires me to fight back, in either a murmur, or a shout. If i told someone this, they would think im "crazy", or so. But the truth is, my inner voice has helped me, in ways they'll never know. My inner voice completes "me", it makes me the man more than any cliche, or soft drink can. My inner voice, it drives me to new levels, and heights. It makes me keep reaching, through brightest days, and darkest nights. my inner voice urges me through joy, and through stryfe. it pushes me forward, through the great dance called life. Over all the other voices i hear that come, and that go, my silent inner voice is the LOUDEST i know. Now some will think im crazy, but they dont understand. I NEED my inner voice, to make me a complete man. [This message has been edited by The_Driven (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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ConderE Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 29TX, USA |
This is a good poem about how you can help yourself if you try. I liked your approach. When you can listen to yourself more than to someone else, you will never go wrong. I can't wait to see your next post. |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I think this is great i realy enjoyed it. I hope to read more of your poems. lovely_kris |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful flow and rhyme Driven! Much enjoyed the message you portrayed ... for it is sooooo true. No, you're not crazy at all, for those that listen to that inner voice, make the best choices in life. Well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. Keep up the good work. I don't think your crazy. I think everyone feels this way at one point or another. Just keep your head up. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a good poem...i really like it...and i dont think you are crazy...we all have a voice in our head that helps us...like you said it tells us to get up and all that other good stuff... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a fantastic poem, and I must say, untill I read this, I also though I was crazy, cause I sometimes tend to have these intense conversations with myself, hehe Keep up the good writing Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
This is a wonderful poem, and really well written. Keep up the great work. Kittie |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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