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cutie2005
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

0 posted 2000-07-11 09:06 PM


Guys, Most are my friends, and are my buds
They like me, I like them but never did I tend to go out with them.
And I know if i go out with them, most won't still be my friends..
Friendship means a world to me, so can't it mean one to them?
They ask me out and I say No, They get mad and wonder why,
I say the simple words to them, "Friendship means more to me, then going out with you"
but they don't seem to get it
Why not?
I wonder and wonder, and say my simple words over and over..
I still stick to being friends, but inside there is more, and i know they want more.
But they are my friends, or my buds, cuz friendship is more to me then life!!

© Copyright 2000 Amanda - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-07-12 06:14 AM


Very thought-provoking Cutie! Friendships are a treasured gift, and you are so fortunate to have this.  Keep taking life at your "own" pace ... and don't feel preasured to  move beyond! Hope to read more ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-07-12 02:40 PM


cutie this is a good poem...but it made me think...dont you think even though it may or may not ruin a friendship wouldnt you want to be with someone you know and trust??? i have been with my best friend for about 5 months now...and i think that it was better for me to hook up with hime then some guy i dont even know...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

3 posted 2000-07-13 06:21 PM


I think this is a wounderful poem. I think you did a great job. I hope to read more

Lovely_Kris

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
4 posted 2000-07-14 10:08 AM


I think friendships are everything.  Most of my friends are guys too.  I never plan to go with them, just keep your head up.  Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-12-01 11:07 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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