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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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Always think of me, and remember love is not a myth and when you feel fate has betrayed you just look deeper, beyond yourself soon enough, you'll find whats true Look past all that life denies and know I'll always long to fall asleep with your name upon my lips, and your reflection in my eyes... [This message has been edited by Jenabou (edited 06-14-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
simply beautiful Jenabou....so very true aswell...we are often blinded to these things but if we learn to see with more than just our eyes then our wings will be mended... Well done  D.E. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ "So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler *+Daughter of Darkness+* |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I agree! very well written. we are ALL at some point oblivious to these things  and you put it in just the right way. Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~  "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
ok guys i smell i didnt write this poem my firend(Laura) did but i told you that in an e-mail jsut incase you didnt get it im posting this [This message has been edited by Jenabou (edited 07-23-2000).] |
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Candy Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 17 |
well tell your friend her poem was great i loved it! Candy |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Beautiful poem...I loved it. I look forward to reading more. Keep writing and have fun! Love ya Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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McDee New Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1Australia |
FANTASTIC! THis poem clearly shows the way i feel. I couldn't write about it, so thank your friend for showing me that i wasn't the only person who felt this way! |
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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
i like this a lot, keep up the good work!!! *Rach* |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
I can relate well to this. Love is really not a myth Sincerely A_L |
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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
wow...this is such a good poem! all of you work is so beautiful! wow... mr  "crazy" is just who you are...amplified. some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color. |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a lovely poem, job well done. I think we all would like what this poem says. Keep the good stuff rolling. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great Poem. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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