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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Every star in the sky, Represents one of us. Watching over, Showing the way. And once we die, We float into them. To watch over, Everyone we love. (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is very good i enjoyed it much. i have not seen you in awhile is everything ok with you? i hope so well hope to read more. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
This poem was very well written. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a beautiful poem...i think that you should have submitted this poem for the book cuz you would have had my vote...the more i read your poems the more i am intrested in reading the new ones you submit...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
I love it so much! It is so simple, yet has a powerful meaning. You are a wonderful writer!  "Of all those arts in which the wise excel, Nature's chief masterpiece is writing well." ~Essay on Poetry, John Sheffield "Those who trust in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint." ~Isaiah 40:3 |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Hey Now, I was just going thru my old poetry, and found this...I'd forgetten all about it! so i decided to *Bump* it up If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm glad that you gave this one a boost, Tamma. I've always loved to gaze at the stars, and I love how you've explained them to us. Keep up the great work! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great thought hear, thanks for bumping it! I like the poem, it's good "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
awesome poem tamma! i totally believe that too. i think that when someone dies their star will be watching you all the time so they don't really leave you. Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this is a great explanation of what happens when we die and stuff. Wonderful. I loved this short poem very much.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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