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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Sometimes the day goes by and my life is all forgotten. Sometimes I lay awake at night with dreams circling around in my head more marvelous than the glamour and shine of all the silver screen. Sometimes I shed a tear but I know its not much farther now. Sometimes the world is mine to take. Sometimes it's me who's taken. Sometimes I reach for you. Shadows about me, I don't know which way to turn. This pain inside me always burns allways in anger in me it turns. Hold me, touch me, take me, break me, make me, hurt me, heal me, feel me. Hold me tight and don't let go. Please; just let love for me inside you grow. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Sometimes I read a beautiful poem and I don't know what to say...  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
I didn't think twice about giving my vote to this one. Wonderful poem, keep up the good writing. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sometimes ... talent just can't be held back! Nicely written Jacman ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This was great!! Keep writeing i would love to hear more from ya.. I mean it.. Love ya Cutie |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
express yourself and let your dreams come alive. well i love the poem my fav from you and i hope that you keep it up and never stop love the work. -heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid i'll take over!!!! I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jacman~~~what can i say this is a beautiful poem...keep up the good work...one day i hope that you find someone special that can let their love grow for you...keep posting i hope to read more by you... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
all I can say is it's beautiful! April |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I don't recognize this one, but I know what I like and this falls in there somewhere over the rainbow, way up high, there's a land that I heard of once in a lullaby. Sometimes....I forget what I'm talking about and start singing. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Jacman, I loved it. It was very well written. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Linzi Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 35Pennsylvania, USA |
Awesome poem! I loved it! ~*~Linzi~*~ "Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Extremely, utterly heartfelt..I feel a lump in my throat I think I'm going to cry!! It was moving, the highlight of my day, thank you!!! Ceinwyn |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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