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Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-06-14 03:06 AM





Ignorance

A darkness; blinding is it's bliss.
No visions, no sounds,
no pain can find this darkness.
The visions; absent are the cries
because of tainted sight.
The sounds; absent through the lies.
A clue is far begone to sense.
Any reality is
when living in ignorance.

Jeremy D. Halstead


 

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Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
1 posted 2000-06-14 04:37 PM


this is a beautifully written poem.
you have a wonderfull way of expressiong yourself
and im sure we all can relate to this poem

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
2 posted 2000-06-14 04:42 PM


well Jer, knowing and talking to you changes the way I look at your poems! this is not a bad hting though! It makes me look deeper into your real personality!! Keep writin! L2Lu! Love Always~*~Jess~*~

 "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
3 posted 2000-06-14 05:15 PM


I love this poem Jeremy...with all the ignorance and blinded rituals of day to day that I see in many people I like meeting people who can see the difference for all that it really is....excellent read...

                               D.E.


 Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~

"So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler

*+Daughter of Darkness+*


Kandi
Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell
4 posted 2000-06-14 06:33 PM


Wow, I've only been a member for like a half hour, but I've read a lot of ur work, jeremy, and you are so talented! I admire what you write a lot.  Don't stop okay?

Also, if anyone can help, like i siad I'm new here and I wanted to know how to make my profile.  Hee hee I'm slow and can't figure it out!  

Thanx! Good job again!  


 

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
5 posted 2000-06-14 06:49 PM


sorry Jeremy~this one's for Kandi~~~Click on the "members" link at the top. and I'm sure you won't have a problem finding ot from there. Welcome to Passions!  

Still love ya Jeremy! lol  


 "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"

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