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A Lost Soul
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A Lost Soul |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
A Lost Soul I was walking through the woods I heard the sounds of crying I was searching I saw a young child A lost soul He was sad He was lost He couldn't find his family He wanted my help A lost soul Sometimes we want to be alone Other times we need a friend But all of us has A lost soul "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Once again your words strike to the heart. We are all lost, insearch of someone or something to find us and bring us into the light. Loved it. Keep 'em coming. Thomas |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Wow chel. very good. I like the structure that the poem has. It reads smothly, very nice. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I love the way you made me see what you saw and feel what you felt...that makes for very good poetry....special job!!! Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Chel this is a good poem...you made it actually believably...like i was able to picture this in my head...it reminds me of the story hansel and gretel... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was so sweet and tender Chel ... lovely writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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