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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
My senorita why do you turn away from me Is it something I said or did My senorita open up yourself to me Believe me I would understand My senorita tell me all you have to say Or whisper it to me My senorita write it down, and send it to me Better yet right it down, and give it to me My senorita your not alone in this world Set yourself free My senorita let out a cry to me Show me how much you can feel towards me My senorita tell me all you have to say My senorita I am listening |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I know precisely how you feel! I once had a "senorita" that would frequently turn away from me, because she didn't understood how I felt. She DID find out one day, and actually grew more distant. Sad. Thanks for opening up an old wound. ^_^ Good poem. Maybe be brave, talk to her a little. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Beautiful poem... Love is the hardest game to play and there are no instructions on what to do nor how to do it, we have to learn from our and others mistakes, although even others mistakes aren't enough to teach us!! Good Luck!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
This piece means alot to me and I thank you for your replies...as I say (El amor todo lo puede) |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
TrueLUV: I know exactly how you feel in this poem, as I am sure so many other people do too. Melz said it perfectly in her reply on what Love is. I hope she tells you. Good luck.  ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Senor magnÃfico de poema. Agradeza para compartirlo. Espero que las cosas se mejoren para usted. (I hope that makes sense) Any how, great poem. Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really liked this poem a lot, it's written well! It sounds like you really want to share yourself with your senorita, and if this is going on right now, I hope she tells you everything "My senorita tell me all you have to say Or whisper it to me My senorita write it down, and send it to me" < !signature--> "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great cuz I so understand what you're saying by this. I been there, I done that.........didn't like there......didn't like that.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Aww this is sad, but very sweet! Good luck with this girl |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i guess we can all relate to this in some sort of way.. when a girl ignores you or just doesnt like you.. but keep trying and things may turn out right best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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