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Will DeVore Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 12Weddington, NC, USA |
Coming back is often hard to do When someone loses track They wander in circles But rarely reach their beginning An awful lot of willpower is required For one to actually go back It's embarrassing to return to a past That was left behind so long ago What does one do once they arrive To the place whence they came Do they turn back the earmarked pages of their life Or do they open up a new chapter ~1/2/01~ -=Will=- |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
good ideas ....i often wonder the same thing if this is about you, i hope you find what youre looking for best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
goign around in a circle really is a pain. i totally agree with Jeremy. Regina |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I know just what your poem's talking about...it's a pain in the butt to go back, I would rather just not do it. Anyway, good job! "By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee." "I AM CANADIAN!!" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A very thought-provoking concept Will ... very nicely composed, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Impressive. I'm very impressed. Very. You've got talent... keep it coming, eh?~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nice. The question at the end is something you'll have to answer on yer own. You'll know what to do!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Will DeVore Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 12Weddington, NC, USA |
I expected a response somewhat like that. To answer the responses, this post is not in fact about me. Just an idea that passed through my head. And I have to agree with Dopey_Dope. The question is one that must be answered in private. That's why I didn't provide one. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I always tell my friends to go forwoards... not necessasarliy open a new chapter, but to go forwards... we can't change the past, only the future... starting afresh is hard but sometimes it is the best thing to do!! Good writing and great post, looking forward to more!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem here, it has gotten some really good responses. I also think, well I know, that Dopey is right (when isn't he ) and melz has some great thoughts. They all stole my ideas and posted them before I could!!! It's not fair! Ok, anyway, nice job on the poem. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wonderful ideas!!! just remember, looking to the past actually is what helps us move to the future. We learn from our past I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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