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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Yesterday I turned 18, A milestone, I suppose. Yet I feel no different, No stronger, no more benifited. All grown up, but still with no clue how. I should be prepared, ready to see the world. I'm still unsure of who I am, Still shady about this whole wide world. So now what? Buy a lottery ticket and vote for "dumb or dumber", It is my generation, we're leading this country, So now what? |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
this country is screwed! Anyways, nice poem, congrats~ c-ya I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Hey I'll be 18 in Feb, I like your poem though... ~*~Menna~*~ |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Well first off happy belated B-day. Secondly, nice poem. I can relate. "So now what?" pretty much summed up my 18th b-day. Keep them coming IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
 HAPPY BIRTHDAY GURL!!! This was a good poem and i know what ur saying...Good poem hun |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
happy birthday!well i just turned 14 so as some say im still a babe.good luck in the big bad world. REgina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
happy b-day........ and as for your question......."now what?"... well.........i have no clue myself. You're not alone...  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you everybody!!!  "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked how you wrote this. Birthdays seem to be like that, you don't feel any different. I hope you find something to do next! Oh yeah, happy birthday!! (I'm just a little late )"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
eh, dont worry bout it. i havnt felt any different for a while now. keep 'em comin. jeremy r "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
18 is a milestone, but I am yet to figure out what is sooo good about it... I too feel no different... great job expressing how soo many of us feel!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! though i'm a little late I guess just take it day by day. Your experiences in life will lead you to what you would wanna do in life. I got one suggestion, if you're not yet, a good start is going to college I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
... [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hey, thanks everybody!! Yeah, Acire I have to graduate high school first!! Don't worry though I am a senior this year....so I'll go to college soon enough.xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
there were some huge changes for me when I hit 18. I started college(whole new world) and I moved out( taking care of myself-guess I'm not doing a very good job)Once you graduate I think you might start to notice the change a little more. Jon |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
nice viewpoint.. i am not 18 yet but i know exactly what you are saying. great work ~*Pixie*~ |
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