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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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Sometimes life exceeds your expectations and sends you the "perfect person" at the perfect time But before you know it this "perfect person" turns out to be nothing but lies and pain. You devote your entire life to this "perfect person" only to get stabbed in the back time and time again This "perfect person" makes you sick,makes you ill but you cant let go You keep going back for more like you cant get enough heart ache,like you cant cry enough tears you keep going back like you enjoy the hurt the "perfect person" brings you like you love having your heart ripped in two Your "perfect person" controls you and lets you think of nothing but him your "perfect person" consumes every bit of your life till there is nothing of you left your life becomes his and now your not yourself you never will be again You let life exceed your expectations, no one is perfect.... |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
No one is perfect..its an illusion we see when we are imperfect....evryone errs and better is to forgive them rather than holding a grudge...embrace them with all their shortcomings...someday they'll turn out to be perfect... Sincerely A_L |
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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
very good poem!! it is definitly true that no one is perfect, but sometimes love, or supposed love, can blind us from all logic..ya know? anyway -- good job  hope to see more from ya..mr  "crazy" is just who you are...amplified. some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! I really like this poem. It speaks volumes, and it is so true. You know what they say, "We marry our own nightmares". I'll be looking for more of your work. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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