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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
The Past... Looking back on the things you've done; Feelings come flooding back. The happiness, the joy, the good times; Seems as though they've come and gone, figures of your imagination. Looking back on the things you've done; Feelings come flooding back. The hurt, the pain, the sorrow. Seems as though they're here to stay, wishing they weren't real. As I look back on what's been done; Feelings come flooding back. The good times,the bad ones,the happiness,sadness,the hurt & the pain. I can't allow them to hold me, I have to move on somehow. I feel the same is true for you; This will take time I know. No matter how long it takes, I will wait. As I look at you, I see now,not then...the present and the future,not the past. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
wow this poem was so good! |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Thank for the reply. Glad that you liked it. "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Good poem - It reminds me of one that I read the other day called "Photographs" or something of that sort. Memories both good and bad, once all remembered make you sad because they are gone!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very lovely sentiments NiceGuy. The sorrow and hurt of remembrance is brightened by your inspirational and positive closing stanza looking toward the future ... I enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Yeah, this reminds me of "photographs" too. I liked the meaning behind this and the positivity in the end. Good read. apsara |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Thank you everyone for your replies. I am glad that you liked this. I wasn't too sure if it was going to be something you would all read. Thanx a lot for the support!! "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like how this was written and think that you did a very good job on it. Nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Thank for the reply and I'm glad that you liked it. "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was good niceguy. Nice to see you back posting!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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