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Al Nany Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 16 |
Hi people, I'm sorry to announce that I will no longer be posting here. My friend has started his website www.serenepoets.com and I promised I'll be posting there from now on. It's been fun here and I am grateful for all the kind comments I've received. Below are my last posts, thank you, and farewell. This first poem I actually don't like it much... it's one of my early superficial poems... but here it is anyway... it's Christmas  Christmas of Loneliness Leaves have fallen, The lake is a scar-less mirror. The sun is at rest, the clouds are far, The snowflake has touched the peaceful field. Looking above, upon our mistletoe, The enchanted ornament we stood under. Memories of the White Christmas. Memories of our happiness. Angelic dove resting upon my palm. its faithful other is distant away with you. The Christmas of loneness, The Christmas without you. Out on the sky, dots of stars, Which one are you wishing upon? Full of messages that needs to be sent, Will Santa deliver my loving words? I remember when we would decorate the Christmas tree, I remember how we would hang the up the mistletoe, I remember the dinner we had together by the candlelights, I remember us sitting next to the fireplace holding hands, I remember the white rose you gave me when you kissed me good night. I remember how wonderful it was to spend Christmas eve with the one I love. I remember how wonderful it was to spend my Christmas with you. Will Santa bring the gift on my list? Will Santa bring you to my side? The Christmas tree, our mistletoe. The candlelights. The fireplace. The white rose. With out you my Christmas isn't complete. The night is late, the fire has died. Yet, I do not miss you any less. I hear the knock, I hear the bells. I opened the door, I saw a white rose. I see you. Merry Christmas. 1997 Christmas This is the last poems folks, bye bye! Goodbye Here I am left alone, The world has died on me. I know this will be the last, But I still love the most. Slowly, quietly, My heart begins to cry. So hurt, so empty, Love contains no sweetness. I cry, to the image, Asking thousands of why. So much time, so much love, So much pain and so much tears. . . For whom? For what? For the cold one who never cared. A shattered heart, A floating soul, Me, Not knowing where to go. Never wished it to end, So soon, so sudden, What have I done wrong? Hatred, slowly growing, Cheated and wasted. This day on, I shall do no wrong. The broken heart, The scar, I can't forget. You and me, Us. Always forever, Lies. You were never true. I, Wish I never knew you. Jan. 17, 1997 Personal Site: truethoughts.net ICQ:2477756 AIM:WPALNANYA Other:warcraft3.tv|dotcomtopia.com|peerbooks.com |
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Al Nany Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 16 |
Oh yeah, I forgot, serenepoets.com needs moderators for their forums, if anyone is interested, please e-mail chris@serenepoets.com to apply. Thanks. Bye. Personal Site: truethoughts.net ICQ:2477756 AIM:WPALNANYA Other:warcraft3.tv|dotcomtopia.com|peerbooks.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Both are very nicely written Al Nany. We wish you luck in your new home, and know that the doors are always open to return for a visit amongst Passions' family. Keep up the great writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
These are beautiful "farewell" pieces. I hope that you enjoy it at serenepoets, and that you stop in here often. Thanks for posting! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job on these poems! I went and took a quick look at the site and might stop back later. Thanks for sharing your poems with us here "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was all so great. Well goodbye and hope to see you around sometime. Pleasure reading your stuff...........  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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