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Hallie_Angel
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since 2000-12-06
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0 posted 2000-12-07 11:08 PM


My puppy and I need to be left,
and the world needs to go away!
No more hurt feelings or discouraging words,
to ruin or take my day!
My puppy understands,
and makes my days so bright!
In all my darkness and sadness,
she is my shining light!
Her soft gentle eyes,
and all the happiness she exerts.
I hug her when I'm sad,
and it takes away all my hurts!
God made her so beautiful,
and she accually loves me!
I love her with all my heart,
because she is my little baby!


I'm obsessed with my puppy/baby/angel, whatever you wanna call it. She is so wonderful. This made Allysa feel nonspecial when she read it a while ago b/c we are best friends. But ya know there is no greater love then the love my baby has to give!

That is why my name is Hallie_Angel: my real name is Catherine.


© Copyright 2000 Hallie_Angel - All Rights Reserved
IsGona
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1 posted 2000-12-07 11:28 PM


Puppies are great (when they're not crapping all over the place lol)  To bad they gotta grow up huh?  I mean I love dogs too.  but their so much better when their pups    Anyhow nice poem and welcome to passions  

IsGona

Erin
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2 posted 2000-12-07 11:33 PM


Welcome to passions!!!

Good poem...I always wished my dog could stay a puppy...But too bad...


People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

Allysa
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3 posted 2000-12-08 04:07 PM


I've already read this one, but I thought I'd drop in to say HEY!!! Welcome to Passions! (since I brought you here) and I feel special!!!
Allysa

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.


Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-12-08 05:05 PM


Dogs, especially puppies, are awesome!  I'm glad to hear you love your dog

"Her soft gentle eyes,
and all the happiness she exerts.
I hug her when I'm sad,
and it takes away all my hurts!"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2000-12-08 08:58 PM


Long live cats!

Ps: Great poem, i know how you feel.....but with cats!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-12-08 09:41 PM


From one Catherine to another, I loved this! You've left me smiling ... many thanks for these sweet words, from another kindred 4-legged-furry-critter-lover ... I couldn't live without them!  

Best wishes,
/Kit (Catherine)

Elizabeth
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7 posted 2000-12-09 06:31 PM


Catherine, this is so sweet!  
Hallie_Angel
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8 posted 2000-12-11 04:17 PM


Thanks yall!!!
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