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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-12-01 03:59 PM


Ok, first of all, this one had some bad language, but I tried to cut it all out...but there was on peice I had to leave in. This sort of involves one I wrote a month or so ago called "The Letter".


I can’t take it anymore,
This is driving me nuts.
I have to make it thru,
At least 2 more weeks.
They’re only doing this,
Because I'm with him.
She wanted him,
But he loves me.
They see me in the hall,
And make kissing noises.
They torture me,
But theres no rule against it.
All I want to Do,
Is find out the problem.
“What the [edit] did I do,
To deserve this from you?”
I see them everywhere,
Theres no escape.

  ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~    
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“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me




[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 12-01-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-12-01 05:12 PM


Yea i can see that you have gone through much througout your life's experiences. Anyway i thought this was a good way to vent out your expression and what you were going through. A good read!


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2 posted 2000-12-02 12:04 PM


I hate it when people react out of jealousy...just because your with Justin doesnt mean you did anything to deserve their behavior...their definately losers if they treat you like that and have nothing better to do on their time than to irritate you. Dont worry..things will get better. Great poem..
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3 posted 2000-12-02 09:39 AM


Yea...Well, I only have a week and a half more to go till I'm 18. After that I only have 3 days of school before Christmas break...Lord knows I need a break from those two. The worst part about it is that its not her, its her 'friends' that are doing it. I'm about to just give up...I just can't take the pressure anymore...I love him, and he loves me...why can't they leave it at that?

   ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~    



“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me

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4 posted 2000-12-03 11:10 AM


You would only be letting them win if you give up.  Enjoy your break from them and try to find a way to deal with them.  Nice job on the poem.

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