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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-11-26 08:19 PM

Your so bad for me,
Poison to my heart.
You were a fate worse than death,
I shoulda realized from the start.
Your my angel here to guide me,
My one and only true love.
I fall asleep at night,
To welcome your face as the one im dreaming of.
How can something so sinful,
Be so full of right?
How could 2 things go good together,
That is as different as day and night?
You kill me with endless stabs,
And fix my wounds over again.
And yet you manage,
To be my bestest friend.
I guess i've never let go of you,
Cause i knew in my heart all along.
That your the one that can break the rules,
Your the right kinda wrong.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-11-26 09:42 PM

This was great. I loved the last line in this one. great poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

silvrduck
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since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

2 posted 2000-11-26 11:12 PM

I loved this! Great job! almost seems odd how you can love someone who is so wrong for you... well, so wrong that they're actually everything you ever need. *smacks forehead*

Anyways, keep up te great work.. everytime, you never cease to amaze me with your talent.
take care,
Sarah

with the unknown comes no expectations
in this i find my peace

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2000-11-27 05:33 AM

xShUgArHiGhx: The right kinda wrong is so what this world is full of..:P

I can totally relate to this poem..as I think everyone can. Great piece of writing.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-11-27 03:11 PM

Hey,
Great job on this one, it says so clearly what your feelings are.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-11-27 03:28 PM

How can something so sinful,
Be so full of right?

Nice choice of words. I think that the things that we are taught to stay away from make us want it more. And if something is really bad then we are gonna want it more then we would. Good poem as always Shugar!!!

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2000-11-27 04:37 PM

Thank you all for your replies!!

Duck---aww thank you so much, im so glad that you like my writing!

AF---im so glad you can relate!! Thanks!!

And also thank you Erin, Dopey, And Lakewalker!!!

XoXo Muahz Guys

Kandi
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

7 posted 2000-11-27 04:51 PM

I was really feeling this poem...easy to relate to...I like that

And I really loved the ending...powerful closing...I like that too

This was an awesome piece. Keep writing - can't wait to see more. And hope things work out for you and this wrong butright person
All the best
Kandi

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~Won't you come and hold my hand?
This world has taken me as far as it can...
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