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As he lies on the ground (old post, i posted under |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Well everyone this poem was originaly posted under my real name,Regina. But since I forgot my password, i decided to start from scratch.....it was orginally posted on August 6 2000. So enjoy....btw I edited alot...Ina(aka Regina) As he lies on the ground: As he lies on the ground with a bullet through his head she cries heart wrenching sobs they were suppose to die together like Romeo and Juliet with the dagger and the poison She told him she loved him do anything for him they were going to die together she wanted to die, he wanted to die as the bullet went through his skull she wanted to live, not die As the days pass by she walks in sorrow for the love of her life is dead and its all her fault she could have stopped tis her long black hair blowing wildly in the wind as they lowered his body in the inky grave she knew they had made a mistake she ran forward and dropped 3 roses, white, red and black on his oak coffin she spoke three words "I love you, James" |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Such a sad story you've told here, Regina. It just shows you that death isn't the solution for anything... it just makes things worse for the people that are left behind. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one is really good. Is this from any type of personal experience? Anyway, good job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ow wow Ina! Such a sad story. I hope that this isnt from a personal experience and if it is I am sorry to hear about it. Thanks for sharing this piece with us. It shows to us that we suffer for living but hurt when we die. And that turning to death for the right answers is the wrong thing to do. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great...although very sad.... i liked it a lot! keep it up cutie!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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