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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
sometimes i wonder if it's worth it, the pain, the agony, longing to be loved, to be heard, but never listened to. sometimes i wonder if it's worth it, falling in love, getting hurt, crushed in to pieces, by the one you love. sometimes i wonder if it's worth it, living life, planning ahead, when you could just, live each day at a time. sometimes i wonder if it's worth it, trying all the time, when you know for sure, no matter how hard you try, you'll never be good enough... |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I often wonder these things too Tia...but i think it all depends on the person who your involved with for you to decide if it truely is worth it. I thought this was an excellent poem! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
It's worth it. Just think of all the rewards life gives if you learn to look for them. 'You are who you make yourself out to be, not who others make you out to be'. Don't ask where that came from, i heard it a long time ago. I think they were right. Great poem.. A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think its worth it. Great job expressing these questions though, the poem is good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It's always worth it. always!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
WOW i can totally relate. especially to the ending, i mean no matter how hard i work, what is it gonna get me? am i gonna get into medical school or will it just be a waste? and i wonder if boys are really worth all the pain they put us through. awesome poem! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Tia~Sometimes wondering gives us good answers till we figure them out...Good poem...Thanks for sharing it...And just remember that somethings are worth it... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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