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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Oh, if only I knew what I wanted to say... lol Vreni Outstretched Hand I lay in my grave, stretch out my hand, Pray someone sees it, can understand. Dirt kicked in my eyes, makes me blind, All that remains, no faults can I find. You pass my tombstone, walk right by Fail to observe, keep living your lie. I shiver slightly, deeper still I shall dig, Board up my soul, pain’s mark is too big. Curl into a sordid ball, feel other’s hate, Rescind my palm as hope dissipates. My lips snarl in anger, clenching a fist, While the terrified loneliness does persist. I look down at my fingers, burnt with cold, Chapped by neglect, so young, yet old. Scars of past misery, craggy and rough, Experience scalded sorely, left them tough. Each nail a still of innocence purloined, At each knuckle, lost memories conjoined. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This was an awesome poem. it was very symbolic. i liked it, great poem!  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It's late......*squints his eyes* i need sleep. Great poem though, i loved this. A cry for help? You know im here for u!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Another great one. I really like the style you write in, all of your poems are so good "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow. I loved it. Terrific...simply terrific... ~Carly |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
What can i say? I have probably exhausted all nice things to say on all your other poems. Your talent is simply amazing. keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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