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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2000-10-31 08:46 PM

10.21.00

You can't honestly say
That you are unaware that it has finally come to be this way
To the point where we no longer know what words to say
Please don't lie to your heart
As the tears from your eyes begin to part
Spare me your shield
And your brick walls you try building around my heart
Remember I was the one to start
And you're the one that was severly cut
Don't tell me that time healed all wounds
After I tried stabbing back into your soul too soon
My doubts and my tears
Are all warnings of impending doom
Or perhaps I'm drowning in a pool of regret
Of all the things that I never meant
So by the grace of god
I beg of you
Brand it into my brain
Just once more whisper out my name
And tell me that you still love me the same
And that we shall always be the best of friends
For Forever and a day..

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (edited 10-31-2000).]

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-11-01 08:23 AM

Oh wow I dont know what to say about this...Is this about a personal experience??? It sounds like you are having a tough time...Well all I can say is that I do hope things get better for you...Keep up the good work!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2000-11-01 09:30 AM

Amazing poem ceinwyn. After I saw one of your poems, and that one reply from someone, I've been associating your poems to him. I might be wrong, but this sounds like one of em. You really poured out your heart into this one. Thanks for sharing it

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-11-01 02:48 PM

This poem is so great, it's very well done. At least in my opinion

It really expresses you thoughts clearly, good job on it.

"Please don't lie to your heart"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2000-11-01 03:53 PM

Hey. Amazing. Simply amazing......

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

5 posted 2000-11-01 04:12 PM

I LOVE this poem!! I know exactly how you are feeling. Great job, keep writing!!

Much luv,
~*~SweetStuff~*~

~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

6 posted 2000-11-01 05:34 PM

Great Poem. The entire thing was awesome but the ending really hit home for me.

"Just once more whisper out my name
And tell me that you still love me the same
And that we shall always be the best of friends
For Forever and a day.."

Really amazing. Keoni

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2000-11-01 05:58 PM

Hey this was great, a very touching poem. I loved the ending.......especially the last 4 lines. Keep it up and keep posting. i love reading your work.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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