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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
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0 posted 2000-10-29 09:41 AM


This is writen for my mom..

Where's the time gone
Last I knew was summer
We were in the pool
Suvi and I were staying up
Watching TV laughing
Having the windows open
Not thinking about our school work
Soon it became the end
Her and I were thinking whos our friends
What classes were we going to like or not
You thought about work
You didn't want this summer to end
But everything comes to an end
I thought whats it going to be without Jessica
I thought about being with new friends and Dave
I thought I am in Ross Cottage no more Gates
I was more than happy
Then it came Suvi had her 1st day
As I was waiting for the bus
I thought about the summer
And how great it was to be with you and everybody
Then I said "Mom next year I'll be thinking of collage"  You Smiled
I thought all that day whats Ross going to be like
Who's my roomate?
Should I call Dave or home first
Or should I unpack
The bus came!
Suvi and I said our "byes"
Lucy looked at me so sadly
You were at work
Now it's OCT where's the time gone!
Love always Minna




You can't find me for love, nor can you have me for love, you can love me for who I am.

© Copyright 2000 Minna Talviharju - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-10-29 12:19 PM


Hey! I know how your feeling...time has flown by so quickly for me too. Your poem sent out an important message...I liked it a lot...=o)
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2 posted 2000-10-29 01:32 PM


Yea, where has the time gone? It's kinda sad when you think about how fast things go by. Oh well, great thoughts.



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Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-10-29 01:49 PM


Time is such a valuable thing, we should all use it in the best ways possible each day!   < !signature-->

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-29-2000).]

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4 posted 2000-10-29 06:51 PM



  Hey. This did indeed send out a great message. We gotta learn how to make the best of the time we've been given, don't we?? Heh well keep it up..

  ~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.


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