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In Return (Repost from Corner Pub (a senryu))
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In Return (Repost from Corner Pub (a senryu)) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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Inside my heart aches < !signature-->at the love I found tonight which can not be shared And if you read this poem you should go right now to the Teen Explorer forum to check it out. You may have to click to see more than one day's stuff to see anything, but you all should go see the other forum for teens "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwwwwwwwww yea unrequited love is the worst buddy. BAD....very BAd!!! BUt Good senryu.....Very GOOD!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I'm glad you think it's good, and thanks for replying  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
cool little words show big meaningjeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Big words mean alot, but little words have alot of meaning. And where that came from I have no idea so I think I'll shut up Great lil poem LW  barb "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thank you for the replies "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
...can I get a few more replies. please??? I mean, even if you hate the poem, just tell me!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Lakewalker~ I love it!!!And for some reason I fell in love with writing them...Soon you will see more from me!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ooh, a lovely Senryu. PIP needs more of these. ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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