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branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2000-10-23 06:07 PM

This attraction between me and u,
These feelings that feel so real,
I think i am truly falling for you,
Yes i realize your the one of my dreams,
Your the one who can take me to the world of happiness,
I want you to know all i need is your hand,
All i need is for you to walk by my side,
We will venture off into a never ending journey,
This journey will be so long u better pack everything,
Cuz baby we are gonna be together for eternity.

*short but sweet yes i know but hey this is for my g/f hey lisa love ya babes*

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-10-23 06:30 PM

Well this was short and sweet. Reminded me of one of those barry white songs. hehe good job

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2000-10-23 07:35 PM

Hey. This was so sweet, she must be one cool girl. And if I knew who Barry White was, I'd prolly agree with Dopey. or something. well byebye nows...happy writing..

~Carly

The people walking in darkness
have seen a great light;
on those living in the land of the shadow of death
a light has dawned.
~Isaiah 9:1-2

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

3 posted 2000-10-24 03:14 PM

Barry white? o isnt he a singer? LOL all well n e ways thanks to the whole 2 ppl that reply'd i just like to let u know yes she is a very special person.

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-10-24 04:35 PM

Well look, I'm replying

And you guys don't know who barry white is? ...what is the world coming to??? Anyway, this poem is filled with feelings and I like that, well expressed thoughts and emotion

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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