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Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-10-13 08:55 PM

Dear Soulmate
Please don't be late
I'm right here, where I've always been
Did you lose my house number again?
And if I'm not home
To another go please don't rome
Look under my mat, by the door, you'll see
I left you my house key
I promise, I won't be long
And when I get back, I'll sing you a sweet song
And even if you live far away
And can't can't see me right away
My love for you will never go away
So come quick if you can
Cause I hate having an empty hand
Love Always
Nicole

~Guys are like stars,
there are millions
of them, but only
one can make you dreams
come true~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2000-10-13 10:00 PM

hey! Very good poem, there's something so sweet and inviting about this offer to your soul mate. It expresses so much loving. Great job =o) I hope he comes to you soon!

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

2 posted 2000-10-13 10:11 PM

i know what ya mean in this poem, good job in describing your waiting. I liked it.

jeremy r

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I Got a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-10-13 11:16 PM

Good concept and i liked the poem. Just a sidenote.....you mispelled ROAM......ok good poem bye!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-10-14 01:05 PM

Well, he has no excuse not to come over now! Great job on this one

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2000-10-14 06:28 PM

very well written. This poem actually put a smile on my face. I hope you find him and he find you. keep it up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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