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Moving on.... |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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Time to Start Rebuilding Wash some of the Memories from my Mind The hardest Part of Loving Is when the other Doesn't Love You But life Goes On Time keeps passing Along its Way Got to swallow My Pride Put the Hurting Behind Look for a New Day I still Wish her Well In all that she Seeks Desires She'll always own Part of my Heart Thankful for the Moments Careing "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Love is definately one of the hardest things in the world to move on from. No matter what you do, that person impacted your life no matter how insignifcant or tremendous the impact was. I admire you for keeping your head up high and moving on with your life instead of feeling bad for yourself and dwelling in the past like me. Great poem!! |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
The hardest Part of Loving Is when the other Doesn't Love You It's been raining since you left me. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea like i said before, i like your style. Less boring than most poems i read. Great joB!  |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
great post, wonderful and original style. salma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It's very kind of you to realize that their life must go on and wish them luck. Even though it's hard you still seem to have a positive attitude, that's good  I also like this style. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
thanks to every body for the very gracious replies I will do my best to read post from every body here. I have just been so busy lately it's kinda hard |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WOW!!!This was really good...The worst thing about falling in love is getting your heart broken...But it sounds like you are doing a good job getting over this girl...Your poem was amazing...Thanks for sharing it!!!  ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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