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0 posted 2000-10-08 09:44 PM



Please walk away from me,
And dont you dare look back.
I need to be alone now,
My feelings and emotions have been knocked off track.
I dont want to care about anyone,
Why do you have to be so sweet?
Why is it now,
You are the person i choose to need?
Your the only thing stopping me
From rising up to the clouds.
I know you get sad,
When you think of how that sounds.
It would be so easy,
If you werent in my life.
Everything has become an act,
Leaving the play would be nice.
I see the tears,
Dancing in your green eyes.
I love you so much,
Please dont cry.
I want you to stay away from me.
I'm too tired to hold on.
Your the only the holding me back,
From leaving all along.

© Copyright 2000 Michele - All Rights Reserved
LoveAll
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 148
B'dale, USA
1 posted 2000-10-08 11:14 PM


This is a great poem!  I absolutely love it!  I know what you're going through too.  Maybe you should just be strong an let go...even though it may be hard.  Your courage will be rewarded in the end.  Do what is best for YOU, because that is who is important.  Don't let anyone hold you back from your dreams.  Their tears may seem like the hardest thing to take, but you can walk through 'em.  I have faith in you!  Anyway, you are a wonderful poet!
God Bless and Keep Smiling  

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

Caz
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since 2000-09-13
Posts 133
ConcepciĆ³n, Chile
2 posted 2000-10-09 11:00 AM


Ok, LoveAll said it all. I just have to add one lttle but very important thing... don't even think about leaving the play. I don't know if I get that part, but if it is what I think, don't even think about it, ok? Email me anyway, anytime you need.
Your friend,
                  Caz

Ohhhh, by the way.... the poem is great, I used to feel this way, that's why I'm worried about you.

It's been raining since you left me.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-10-09 01:46 PM


It sounds like you really confused, and I also think LoveAll said it all.  This is a very good poem, please keep them coming
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