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branden726
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0 posted 2000-10-08 01:34 PM


The most wonderful night of my life was when I held you,
Your skin so soft,
Your body so close,
I never ever want to get any farther away from you,
Tonite you looked so beautiful,
I want to hold you forever and ever,
Me and you the best couple ever.

Lastnight when your lips touched mine everything froze,
The nite is ours lets make the best of it,
I have found the love of my life,
Yes its you and yes its true in the end,
I Lisa love you.



"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

© Copyright 2000 Branden Jacobs - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-10-08 02:13 PM


Awww this poem was sooo cute!! Great job expressing your feelings!

"Lastnight when your lips touched mine everything froze"

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2 posted 2000-10-08 02:24 PM


This is very sweet. She's lucky.
Jenn


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3 posted 2000-10-08 02:33 PM


This was so sweet!!!Thanks for sharing it...And keep up the good work!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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4 posted 2000-10-08 05:29 PM


This poem is cool and I hope everything stays great for you two
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