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luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31
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Perth, Australia

0 posted 2000-10-04 06:30 AM


Thoughts about the bestest girlfriend eva....

What is Love?
Love is Faith,
Love is Belief,
love is an undying Trust,
A Bond that cannot be separated by any Force.
If this is but Love,
Then,
The vastness of the Love in my heart knows no boundaries,
The Strength of my faith in you is undying,
And my belief in you is undenying.
Love is Eternal,
If this be true,
Then so be my Love for you,
For in the bible it tells me,
That when what is perfect comes,
what is partial will disappear,
And in your eyes, these partial things
Shall never even appear, because you are perfect.
For only three things are truly eternal,
Faith, Hope and Love
and they are truly in my heart which I give to you.
Jo, I love you


By Kristian Ellingsen




*my boyfriend wrote this for me, its so sweet & i thought i'd share it with you. he's the best! *


[This message has been edited by luvnkris (edited 10-04-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Jo - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-10-04 03:47 PM


This is so sweet, it must have made you feel so special
Caz
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since 2000-09-13
Posts 133
ConcepciĆ³n, Chile
2 posted 2000-10-04 04:42 PM


Hey, tell us the story, tell us what you felt. It must be great to have someone that makes you feel so special. I'm saying it because I'm a guy, and it's very hard for us to show our feelings. If this guy did this for you, then he must be really in love with you, and you must be very special to him. Thanks for sharing your poem with us, bye.

It's been raining since you left me.

DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
3 posted 2000-10-04 05:06 PM


DANG~!* That sounded like Shakespeare lol hats off to your bf! And thats o awesome that you've found someone like that to share your heart with. now that uve got him, just never let go  

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia
4 posted 2000-10-04 09:36 PM


hey, yeh he is so incredible!!
we've only been together for 3mths but we were close friends for a while before that.
he's the sweetest guy i have ever known, and he has this amazing abilty to make me feel so special and happy everytime i even think of him! and i know i will never let him go!
Luv Jo
xoxoxox


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-10-04 09:37 PM


Tell your boyfriend I give him 2 thumbs up...For writing the poem and for being so sweet in it...Thanks for sharing this...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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