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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
This poem is for my friend again, I like (love) her very much, so I try to make her happy and I think this is the best way. Anytime Anytime you need a friend, Let me be the one who cares. I will take your pain away, And I will be here to stay. Anytime you need me near, Let me dry your eyes from tears, I will take all your fears, And bury them away from here. Anytime you fall asleep, Let me get inside your dreams, I will take you far away, And I will show you the right way. Anytime you want to hide, Let me be right at you side, I will take all his lies, And stay with you every night. It's been raining since you left me. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
wow...I like it a lot...if I was your friend I'd be extrememly touched...this is such a sweet thing to do. I wish I could be half as good a friend as you are. **life is like an ice cream...the trick is not to get brain freeze** **I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away** ~Robbie Williams~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That is so incredibly sweet! I think I would cry if anyone ever wrote something like that for me. I hope you've showed the person your poem, it's great!! Keep it up, hasta luego Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is such a nice poem and this person is extemely lucky to have you as a friend. Great job writing this one  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Caz~ This is so sweet...She must be really special to have such a sweet friend like you...I hope that you show her this too...Show her what she means to you and what kind of friend you are...Good work!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
aaaw!! great one again caz!!! I'm so happy that you've found someone!!! EY, I'll mail ya, ok?? lotsa love, VS All of my life Where have you been I wonder if I'll Ever see you again ~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was great!! I liked that, it reminds me of my best friend who is going through some hard times right now. Keep writing! Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ ~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~ |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Thanks for replying, it means a lot to me. Well, I'm so happy. I showed her the first poem, called "At your side" (I posted it last week I think)and she was really happy. But when I gave her this poem, she said she loved me and I said I love you too and she wrote me a poem and I'm so happy. We are together now, I'm happy now. Thanks, I couldn't have done this without you, you have been by my side always. Thanks, all of you, thanks. It's been raining since you left me. |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Will you stay with me when he lies to me? j/k i bet you would tho if we were friends huh? well ill tell you what there aint nothing in the world thats better then know a friend you know truly cares great poem i just love it watch out i might steal it...j/k but you have given me a lets say passion to write about friends not ex lovers |
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