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emptyness
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since 2000-03-09
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mobile,Ala,USA

0 posted 2000-10-01 05:32 AM


an inner fire warms the soul of a person
an inner fire that must be kept secret burns the body it keeps alive

an inner fire blazes brighter than 1000 suns
an inner fire that is hidden becomes a black hole of depression and hate

an secret inner fire burns in me
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"scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write    
"Cogito ergo sum"-I think, therefore I exist




[This message has been edited by emptyness (edited 10-01-2000).]

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Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

1 posted 2000-10-01 12:06 PM


Alright, it's obvious that whatever this is is really really bothering you.  I wish I could help!!  All I can tell you is to keep your head up and smile!  Hasta luego
Bel


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-10-01 12:55 PM


Great job man, i know all about thisinner fire. Let it out though, or you'll die.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Child of the Stars
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Posts 1658
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3 posted 2000-10-01 02:31 PM



  Wow. This was great. very cool.

   ~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2000-10-01 02:33 PM


Another great poem, I like it emptyness.
StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
5 posted 2000-10-01 02:47 PM


An excellent write emptyness, if I can help I'd love to, I've been through almost everything you could imagine. If you need to talk, you can(and I hope you do) E-mail me at StarPryncess17@hotmail.com I can do my very best to help!! Even if I can't give advice (highly unlikely, but a possibility)talking about it can sometimes tame the fire...I hope to hear from you...
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

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