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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
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since 2000-09-16
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Fitchburg, Ma, Usa

0 posted 2000-09-30 07:15 PM


What I think about cancer
It's mysterious because it comes and kills
It comes in young, old any age
It takes away people who we love.

Cancer comes in mostly every family
It kills the family as well as the person
Cancer isn't curable yet.

Cancer takes away life's
But it cannot take away
Love, Friendship, Currage.

When a person has cancer the whole family does
We may not notice how it affects us
In the end it affects the whole family.

Once that person is getting weaker
The family can't hold on anylonger
The one with cancer can hold on.

The person who has cancer
Is stronger than any super hero
They are strong in their soul.

When they leave our life's
They'll always be in our hearts
They'll always love their family, friends, ect..

They might never find a cure for cancer
But we can help them
Cancer is mysterious.

Minna Talviharju

R.I.P
Mikko Talviharju
Feb 21,1947-Dec 23,1999
We will always miss you daddy


© Copyright 2000 Minna Talviharju - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-09-30 10:25 PM


It's a horrible disease, isn't it?  Well written thoughts here, I could tell you're very passionate about the subject.  Keep up the good work!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 36
Fitchburg, Ma, Usa
2 posted 2000-09-30 10:36 PM


Thank you, I miss my daddy but he's heavens ubove us. Where's he's safe and sound..
   ~*~CPAD~*~


When YOU leave someone in love, friendship, death ect.. You leave footsteeps in their hearts

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
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3 posted 2000-10-01 12:42 PM


This poem was great, I am glad your dad is in heaven having a great time up there. Stay strong.....



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
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4 posted 2000-10-01 01:44 PM


Wonderful thoughts here, and you've written them down well
"Cancer takes away life's
But it cannot take away
Love, Friendship, Currage."


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-10-01 01:54 PM


Cancer comes in mostly every family
It kills the family as well as the person
Cancer isn't curable yet.

I really believe that part...I know cancer has come into our family and took away people that we love...It also took my last dog...It is such a horrible disease...I think that your dad is watching down on you helping you...Just remember hes always with you...Keep up the good work!!!



It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
6 posted 2000-10-01 03:17 PM


What can I say Min? I'm so sorry about your dad, I know that he is no longer in pain, and like you said, he's in heaven and doing everything he ever wanted and ejoying all the things he loved to do. You'll see him again someday, when the time has come, you will no longer miss him so because he'll be with you. Keep your head up and be strong, because I know that's what he raised you to do. *hugs!*
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

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