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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
Days, minutes, seconds fly by i wonder around at the way side the smiles and laughter without a care i see past their lies but do i dare tempted to open blinded eyes but i realize that we live our lies despite i set a mission from now till then right now it starts, right now i begin without a clue where to start or go i can't explain how this will work, i just know so set back and tell me i will fail i've heard it before, though i will prevail darkened is my heart from what i see the lies we live with such zelous glee please take to heart and make it thine look at your watch, you're almost out of time --Hoppy MY FINAL MERIT I REFUSE YOU...I REFUSE PUTTING FROM ME THE BEST I AM --Leaves of Grass There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant "Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good one hoppy!!!Its good to see you back and posting... P.S.~~~I love your quote on death!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Hoppy! This is very well written, you've built some anticipation into this that I could feel as I read through it ... I enjoyed this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
great poem!! there are a lot of ppl who should read this poem I guess... luvz, VS All of my life Where have you been I wonder if I'll Ever see you again ~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
BRAVO Hoppy!!! this is really good... im not kidding. Really well written. keep writing "tempted to open blinded eyes, but i realize that we live our lies" i love this line I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was so true and incredibly well-written. I loved it. ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
so true.. so true,... this i s VERY good hoppy keep it up!!!!~*Pixie*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Awesome job on this one, it flows well and I love the word choice. And it makes you think! Great poem |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this a lot, very deep. Great job bud. keep posting, i look forward to it all.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey, you rock dude! This poem is incredible. I enjoyed every single word. Be cool. *~Meredith~* I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Thats a great poem!! Keep it up hope to hear more. Luv ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
thanks for all of the replies! It's cool to know someone enjoyed something i wrote There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant "Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live." |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Sooooooooooo painfully true!! Wow! You have just amazed me away from my words and thought. You have done well, please do keep posting!! Love Always ~*~Star~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
-=SuGa=- |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
BRAVO!!!!!BRAVO!!!! *a crowd of millions cheers at your art...it's just so beautiful* HUT TWO THREE FOUR! HUT TWO THREE FOUR! the clowns on parade the clowns mascerade rip off your face rip off your brain the clowns on parade -me |
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