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curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
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0 posted 2000-09-26 05:25 PM


I see you standing there
So cute and so new
You looked so peaceful
Like you wouldn't hurt a soul

I see you standing there
Talking amongst your friends
I wonder what you could be saying
Making them laugh like you do

I see you standing there
You are always smiling
You always seem happy
No one could make you cry

I see you standing there
Wishing I were more like you
Everyone likes you
You're so intelligent

I see you standing there
And i realize why I envy you so
I don't want to be you
But I want to be with you



"I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky"
Enrique Iglesias

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
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1 posted 2000-09-26 05:58 PM


this is a really nice sweet poem to write someone. is it someone you know or someone you just admire? well, best of luck  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
2 posted 2000-09-26 07:04 PM


Hey   well i wanted to make sure you got this.  if you want to read more of my poems liek this jsut e mail (rainbowbrite2K@excite.com)me because i have A TON that i wrote about this same exact thing,, they are jind of repetative but oi think you will like them.  and your poem was GREAT  
~*Justine*~

curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 276
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3 posted 2000-09-26 07:16 PM


Thanks so much you guys  

acire: yeah it's a friend of mine, i had a big thing for him but i know he likes this girl so i'm kinda steppin to the side

Justine: i might just have to email you because your poem was really great!


"I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky"
Enrique Iglesias

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