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Abstract Heaven |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Abstract Heaven: I'm walking on the plank of solitude. Eyeing the looking glass of boyhood. I mark my path amongst the rubble, And tread on with pride of being me. My destination is up ahead in the distance, A sense of purity overrides all other emotion. There's countless possibilities in getting to my light. So I press on in diagonal motion. Lost in my introspective while walking, Pondering about florescent clouds and talking animals, Smirking in sarcasm to the thought of a thought. It's all a part of my odyssey of time. Upon arrival, I'm greeted by masses. "Welcome to where souls rest in peace!", said all. And at that moment I realized That heaven is abstract and locked in the mind.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Wow! that was so good i almost had to think some of it before i moved onto the next line! excellent imagination you have! "I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky" Enrique Iglesias |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I'm walking on the plank of solitude. Eyeing the looking glass of boyhood. I mark my path amongst the rubble, And tread on with pride of being me." Powerful and thought-inducing Javier ... I really enjoyed the depth in this piece, well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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