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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-09-24 07:15 PM


(An attraction forms slowly at first.)
I know you'd do almost anything for me...
I need nobody to tell me otherwise, they'd be wrong.
Although your affection for me is beautiful... there is no challenge in you.

I brushed you aside...when you try to hold me.
Discomfort prevailed when you got close to me.
I need your love to stop, why do you want me so much?
I feel nothing more for you...

Suddenly, you realize the truth, maybe it upsets you.
You leave me then... you stop trying so hard.
What is this? Are you leaving my side?
Wow... I miss you.

I want you to come to me again... want my touch once more.
I need you now, will it last?
Is this my heart's truth? Or is it merely craving an unattainable?


[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-24-2000).]

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Erin
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1 posted 2000-09-25 11:47 AM


Wow Jenn!!!Such thoughts...What did you do push this guy away...And now you want him back???It sounds like you are having guy trouble...Oh well there are alot more guys out there...Dont worry about just one...We are all still young...

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

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2 posted 2000-09-25 12:55 PM


As the saying kindda goes "you never realize what you had untill it's gone"  perfect example...I don't know why girls most of the time just play sooooo hard to get.  Don't girls know that its hard to try to ask a girl out...really hard. if it's meant to be, he'll be back

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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3 posted 2000-09-25 05:35 PM


Jenn,
Shame, shame. Weird, isn't it? Wanting something you know you can't have? If you let it go, there's a reason for that. Leave it alone.

Thomas


Let not a word go unspoken,
A thought go unheard,
Let not one heart be broken
Dream of a perfect world.

-Th.A.P.

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