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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Equal Meanings: What can we infer from the woman mind When in fact a true woman is hard to find. And how do we know whats true and what's not, When everything is complex and too hard to be taught. Why is it women try to be better than us? When, in reality, they've one uped the equality bus. And why is it they can't get to comprehend That there's not always a need to stand ground and defend. When is it when you will be who you are. And when it is that society is called "our"? So to the few women in many who are true I say to keep your head up , and always be you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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True, the best thing to be is yourself. I'm not really sure why us women are always on the defensive.. I guess it's because not all guys are as nice as you are.  Keep up the good work! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
(standing with hands on hips she takes firm ground and spouts) Now WAIT a minute here ... just WHAT are you trying to say ... why I aughta ... (hands off hips, smiling now, says) Just kiddin!!! You know I enjoyed this sincerely don't you? A great write Javier! Wonderful thoughts and wisdom, there's no need to be on the defensive, yet many of us can be from time to time. Nice insights, I enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~~~It seems to me that you write what is on your mind...You are a good writer...This is a good poem...A different one...Sounds like you know what you want in a woman...Keep up the good work!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well thanks for what you all said about the poem. Bye! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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