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Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-09-23 07:15 PM

I hope everyone here enjoys this poem...It is one of my favorites...Something that I hope yous will like...I changed a couple of words to make it sound better...Please tell me what you think...

~*One Wish*~

If I was a witch,
and could cast only one spell,
the spell would be,
to lock you behind the gates of hell.
Or should I turn you,
into a frog or maybe a toad,
and drop you off,
on a far away desert road.
Maybe I would like you away,
in a barred up cage,
taunting you,
just to see all of your vicious rage.
One wish would be perfect,
life would be happy for me,
but for just one second,
open your eyes to see what your doing to me.

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*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-23-2000).]

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

1 posted 2000-09-24 05:31 AM

I luv it ERIN!!!!

"but for just one second,
open your eyes to see what your doing to me."

yeah...ppl should first think before they do... at least, when your talking bout feelings... but when they don't they always realize too late what they've done..and only when you point them...

luvz, VS

Experience of survival is the key

To the Gravity of Love
~*~Enigma~*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-24 01:31 PM

Thanks for the reply VS!!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2000-09-24 02:35 PM

once again you amaze me with your talent. I never got to read this before, I'm glad you reposted it...maybe you should repost your older poems for the newer ones to read. You know, i'm going to read them and bump them up for ya.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2000-09-24 02:35 PM

once again you amaze me with your talent. I never got to read this before, I'm glad you reposted it...maybe you should repost your older poems for the newer ones to read. You know, i'm going to read them and bump them up for ya.

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

5 posted 2000-09-24 04:40 PM

that is great!!! I love it!

"One wish would be perfect,
life would be happy for me,
but for just one second,
open your eyes to see what your doing to me."

That is my favorite part. Great poem, you've got some real talent!! Keep writing!

Luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~

~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

6 posted 2000-09-24 05:02 PM

I remember this one!! Quite well actually. And all I can say is I totally know how you feel! There are a few people I would like to do this to. Anyways, I loved this one the first time I read it and I love it still...
Love Always
~*~Jello~*~

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~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-24-2000).]

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